*Comment Porn Battle Post* AMTDI/SUV Sex/Solo Sex

[51stcenturyfox]

Hey, it's party time!  Everybody's welcome to kick in some porn!

Yes, three themes this weekend:  Aliens Made Them Do it, Sex in the Torchwood SUV and Solo Sexing!


You can combine or choose one.

1. This should relate to TW or Doctor Who in some way. Crossovers are fine! The SUV counts as a character.
2. It should fit in the comment box. (That's about 500 words, max.) Please put the fandom and pairing in the subject line.
Example: Torchwood  Jack/Tosh 
3. If you wish to write something longer, just add a summary or snippet and link to your LJ, or reply to your first comment with extra porn.
4. WIP snippets are fine, but the story shouldn't be published earlier - the Battles are for new sexy things. :)  
5. Anon commenting is turned on with screening, in case you prefer to be anonymous.
6. Any ship-war sniping/negativity will be deleted.

Give posters a chance to edit, etc. before replying to a porn post, please.  You know how that ruddy preview thing works (badly).

Any issues/queries-  just message Andreth or Foxy.  Chat/Discussion thread here. Soundtrack by andreth47  (click pop-out player to keep the stream up in a new window).

 

Comments

Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)

[blue-fjords.livejournal.com]

Well, I'll disagree w/ crue, hee; I think it needs to be AMTDI for Tosh and Gwen to get together like this. I don't know; I don't think people are really as flexible as we think in who they would choose for a sexual partner. Think about it, sure, of course, but not act upon it w/out an impetus like this or life-in-danger type of scenario.

I do really like the idea of the coat being its own character, and I think you portrayed that well. My dumb piece of concrit? Genital vocab. I just don't particularly care for most ways of calling a spade a spade. Cock makes sense to me, but I don't like penis or dick or member. With female it's even worse, as I don't really like vagina or pussy or even cunt. Clit I'm okay w/, but it's so specific. This is a problem when writing porn. Why couldn't they be called better words? (See what I mean by my concrit being dumb?)

Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)

[alba17.livejournal.com]

"Genital vocab. I just don't particularly care for most ways of calling a spade a spade. Cock makes sense to me, but I don't like penis or dick or member. With female it's even worse, as I don't really like vagina or pussy or even cunt. Clit I'm okay w/, but it's so specific. This is a problem when writing porn." I completely agree with every word of this! Yes, it's a problem. (Although I kind of liked using a cruder term here.) I've unsuccessfully tried to find alternatives. Also, unless you're dealing with mere impressions, i.e. not being very explicit, it's hard to avoid the use of any nouns. I'll go look at yours to see how you did it, assuming you avoided those terms.