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*Comment Porn Battle Post* AMTDI/SUV Sex/Solo Sex
Hey, it's party time! Everybody's welcome to kick in some porn!
Yes, three themes this weekend: Aliens Made Them Do it, Sex in the Torchwood SUV and Solo Sexing!
You can combine or choose one.
1. This should relate to TW or Doctor Who in some way. Crossovers are fine! The SUV counts as a character.
2. It should fit in the comment box. (That's about 500 words, max.) Please put the fandom and pairing in the subject line.
Example: Torchwood Jack/Tosh
3. If you wish to write something longer, just add a summary or snippet and link to your LJ, or reply to your first comment with extra porn.
4. WIP snippets are fine, but the story shouldn't be published earlier - the Battles are for new sexy things. :)
5. Anon commenting is turned on with screening, in case you prefer to be anonymous.
6. Any ship-war sniping/negativity will be deleted.
Give posters a chance to edit, etc. before replying to a porn post, please. You know how that ruddy preview thing works (badly).
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Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
“Unbutton the coat.” There was a definite air of command.
It was then that Gwen noticed the coat was fully buttoned up, brass buttons gleaming enticingly. Tosh’s hair was curling up at the collar, her eyes full of some kind of promise. Or threat. It wasn’t clear. Gwen’s fingers suddenly itched to feel the smooth metal discs. She reached up and undid one button, looking at Tosh, whose mouth settled into a knowing smirk even as her eyes remained watchful. Then a second button. And a third. Tosh’s mouth curved up a bit more at the edges.
All the buttons were undone.
“Go ahead. Open the coat.” Tosh’s eyes darkened; her smile showed a glint of white. “You know you want to.”
Gwen pulled open the coat and gasped slightly. Tosh was naked, her skin gleaming in contrast to the rough texture of the coat. Save for something long and hard and smooth that protruded from the lower part of the coat. Gwen’s eye followed along its length, then looked back up at Tosh questioningly.
In answer, Tosh grabbed her hips and pulled her forward roughly, smashing her mouth against Gwen’s until she gave way and let her tongue slip in. Tosh’s sweet, pretty mouth, smearing ruby red lipstick over Gwen’s naked lips. Gwen felt like she was being pulled into a riptide with her arms bound. She couldn’t do a thing but go along for the ride.
“I told you there were toys,” Tosh murmured against her lips before nipping the lower one with abandon. She pushed her crotch up into Gwen’s and rolled the shaft over it. All of Gwen’s attention was pulled to that hardness thrust up between them, her nipples alert and sensitive, her vagina moist and warm. She clutched at Tosh’s hips, feeling the supple texture of the leather strap as it slid over the other woman’s satiny skin.
She ran her hands up under the coat, Jack’s coat, gliding up over Tosh’s breasts, fingers ghosting her nipples, tweaking them as they tightened. Tosh pushed and shoved at Gwen’s trousers until they fell to her ankles, puddling at the black boots Tosh had admired. The leather of Gwen’s jacket creaked as the two women pawed and groped, Tosh’s mouth suckling Gwen’s nipple through the thin fabric of her bra, Gwen sinking her teeth into the pulse point in Tosh’s lovely neck.
Tosh shoved Gwen, turning her around as they kissed once more, backing Gwen up onto the desk, the hard phallus grinding against her pussy. Her shoulders hit the desk with a thump, but Gwen was unaware of any discomfort, as she greedily lifted her legs up under the coat to wrap them around Tosh’s back. Tosh sank the thick member into her, pushing it up into her clit, and smiling in satisfaction at Gwen’s cry of pleasure.
***
Jack took the stairs two at a time and bounded into his office. Stopping for a moment to enjoy the tempting tableau of the two women blissed out and unaware on the desk, he ran over to a shelf, grabbed a device and pushed a few buttons. Lights flashed briefly.
He shrugged off the leather jacket he’d worn as camouflage to investigate a possible trade in alien hardware at a leather night at a local club. He wasn’t surprised Tosh had found the device. He also knew Gwen was on her way back to the Hub. But he’d missed the whole damn show.
The two women were stirring, the mass of dark hair differentiating into two heads. Gwen was clearly embarrassed. Tosh looked befuddled, but was coming back to herself. She wrapped herself tightly in the coat once she realized her state and the thing that was jutting out from her crotch. Gwen hurriedly pulled up her trousers, not without a last wistful glance at the bulge at Tosh’s groin.
Jack stood leaning against the shelf, quite amused with the situation. “Kerakullian mind shifter. Emits synthetic hormones designed to emulate the last person who held it. I don’t suppose you ladies would care for a repeat, would you?”
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Extremely sexy - I like that Gwen is turned on by the attitude - and the coat. I would be too! :)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Tosh dressing up as Jack? Hell yeah, I can see that, what with the power play inherent with the coat, the strange dependencies between her and Jack, and Gwen getting off on that? I can see THAT, too.
So love it for this, like this, but would also love to see it without alien device as a standalone, because I think it could really work.
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
I do really like the idea of the coat being its own character, and I think you portrayed that well. My dumb piece of concrit? Genital vocab. I just don't particularly care for most ways of calling a spade a spade. Cock makes sense to me, but I don't like penis or dick or member. With female it's even worse, as I don't really like vagina or pussy or even cunt. Clit I'm okay w/, but it's so specific. This is a problem when writing porn. Why couldn't they be called better words? (See what I mean by my concrit being dumb?)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
For Gwen, Jack is, I think, still that fascinating, not quite here and otherworldly alien being. There is a lot of admiration, a lot of lust there, I think, a lot of "I want to fuck that just to see how different he REALLY is", but she knows he's dangerous, she knws that, I think, she wouldn't ever really want to be with him because of what he could do. I think Gwen recognizes that potential.
And then take your story, where Jack is not in the coat but that coat that symbolizes him is right there, and take Tosh who is wearing it for the reasons fleshed out above and Gwen who is getting off on it for the reasons underneath. The sex between them, it wouldn't be sex between Tosh and Gwen and the chemistry between them is secondary, it would be Tosh as Jack having sex with someone who is the princess and she can be the hero and it would be Gwen who gets a taste of what sex with Jack would be like minus all the dangers.
That's how it works in my mind anyway, and it's a marvelous set-up.
Edited to add: Similarly I can see a Jack/Tosh with her wearing the coat playing on similar Tosh-Jack dynamics there, actually.
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Um, I mean, great plot idea and great writing. Overall, a great piece.
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)
I agree with cruentum - I think you *could* make it work without the AMTDI trick, but it wouldn't be easy.
While I was reading, I thought that Tosh would actually turn out to *be* Jack, changed by some alien tech, btw.
Re: Torchwood, Clothes Make the Woman, Tosh/Gwen (part 2)