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Comment Porn Battle Post AMTDI/SUV Sex/Solo Sex

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Hey, it's party time! Everybody's welcome to kick in some porn!

Yes, three themes this weekend: Aliens Made Them Do it, Sex in the Torchwood SUV and Solo Sexing!

You can combine or choose one.

1. This should relate to TW or Doctor Who in some way. Crossovers are fine! The SUV counts as a character.
2. It should fit in the comment box. (That's about 500 words, max.) Please put the fandom and pairing in the subject line.
Example: Torchwood Jack/Tosh
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4. WIP snippets are fine, but the story shouldn't be published earlier - the Battles are for new sexy things. :)
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6. Any ship-war sniping/negativity will be deleted.

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"So, this thing we're doing," he said as they pulled out and away from the wash, clothing replaced, sitting side by side, buckled up, back windows down to air out the smell. If there was an odour, Jack would say something about it, and then they'd have to deny it, and Tosh would make moon eyes at them, and Ianto would hose the interior down in industrial air freshener, and Jesus, what a bother all that would be.

Suzie glanced away from him, out the window, her fingernails in her mouth. How there even were fingernails to bite anymore was beyond him. "What thing?"

He rolled his eyes. "This thing in which we find excuses to shag in the SUV. I can't keep offering to wash and detail the car."

Suzie shrugged and settled further back into her seat. "Then don't."

Owen watched her as they made their way back to the Hub, furtive glances that she had to know that he was doing. He was more bloody obvious than some teenaged girl, for god's sake. Not, in, well, in a romantic way, but fuck, Suzie was hot and cold. One minute shed got her fingers in his arse, and the next she was dousing him with a fire extinguisher. Not metaphorically speaking, of course.

"Torchwood has other cars," Suzie told him, her mouth quirking in a grin when she turned away from the window, one of her bitten down hands reaching for his on the gear shift. "We never use them. I'm sure they're all filthy."

Owen laughed, but it wasn't very confident; not even he was fooled.

END-O-RAMA

Fab... Suzie's characterization really works for me here. (I'm a reformed nail-biter but not INSANE, so...)

This is canon, and yet we see so few (no) Suzie/Owen stories. Adored!

I KNOW. I THINK SUZIE AND OWEN NEED MORE SEXAY TIMES.

I haven't yet decided whether or not Suzie was crazy here, or just a bitch about office sex. Or to be more specific, office sex with Owen. I prefer the latter.

1) love your 'robust server' icon!

2) loved this phrase: ...pressing a few insincere kisses against her thighs...

3) I love the characterization in this fic!

Lovely casual voice, too. Well done!

P.S.-mind if I friend you? I just stalked your journal a bit and I like your style, kiddo. And does your love of the Waterboys extend to other types of Paddy Rock? I'm a rabid Pogues fan, FM, DKM, Black 47, etc.

1. I got it from fandom wank years ago!
2. Thanks! Nothing sexay with Owen is ever sincere!
3. Thanks again!

Do friend! I do love me some waterboys, and I like he bit of the Pogues (and I KNOW I'm familiar with Black 47, I just don't remember how) that I have heard. I tend to be into the canadian celtic music lately-- great big sea, enter the haggis, but Mike Scott is forever my future husband, even should he die. MY FUTURE HUSBAND, for the Dream Harder album alone.

Ooh, interesting. I love to see people's takes on the dynamic between Owen and Suzie, since we barely saw them interact in canon at all.

Thanks! I think the world needs more Owen/Suzie.

Poor Owen;) Talk about a double-edged sword. Suzie is incredibly hot--she is essentially, but you have really 'fleshed' her out beautifully here! But she's a little SCARY!!!

Love an insecure, but horn-dog Owen!

Well done and lots of fun:)

Ha ha! I love insecure but still asshole Owen! and I think I have discovered a new ship to write about. Woot!

Thanks for commenting!

This is amazing! I love the way you write Suzie - so intense ... and yet she doesn't give a damn.

This is the first (second) time I've written Suzie, and I think I might have to do it again. Suzie, for all that she had two eps, is pretty damn intense.

Thanks for reading!

This is another relationship that isn't explored enough. I love how Owen is pretty much controlled by her. Great piece!

I think this accounts for so much of Owen's animosity towards her in TKKS. He calls her "fucked up" or some such, and then later you find out that they were sleeping together. I wonder if he ever feels guilty that he didn't see anything, or sense anything.

O! And OMG I forgot! Thanks for reading! Bwee!

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