Why has nobody done this threesome? I think it's cuz it's damn hard to do what you've done here -- put across Gwen and Rhys' sexual chemistry, and the ways it would (or wouldn't) be open to an outsider. You know that's what hooked me, but I love the humor and awkwardness and hotness (Ianto blowing Rhys, JESUS no wonder Gwen drops the pillows). And OMG, how did I manage to overlook the tickle fight on the first two reads???
Love it, love you for taking it on and making it smoking and real. And kudos for Jack's presence-absence, too.
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Date: 2009-10-29 05:15 pm (UTC)Why has nobody done this threesome? I think it's cuz it's damn hard to do what you've done here -- put across Gwen and Rhys' sexual chemistry, and the ways it would (or wouldn't) be open to an outsider. You know that's what hooked me, but I love the humor and awkwardness and hotness (Ianto blowing Rhys, JESUS no wonder Gwen drops the pillows). And OMG, how did I manage to overlook the tickle fight on the first two reads???
Love it, love you for taking it on and making it smoking and real. And kudos for Jack's presence-absence, too.