This was really beautiful. I was mesmerized. And I really hope that doesn't sound cheesy because I'm not mesmerized by most fic, you know? I enjoy a wide variety of fic but I'm not always in the moment like I was with this one.

You have a very good Gwen voice (gee, I wonder why? LOL).

...sent a silent wish to the universe that he wouldn't remark, or grin his patented cocky Jack grin, and he didn't

I really enjoyed that line because, as much as I love Jack, sometimes I want to see something out of character with him and it's wonderful that he can be like this with Gwen. I love Ianto and Jack. But I also love Gwen and Jack and I don't see it very often.

Lovely, babe. :)