Well, I'll disagree w/ crue, hee; I think it needs to be AMTDI for Tosh and Gwen to get together like this. I don't know; I don't think people are really as flexible as we think in who they would choose for a sexual partner. Think about it, sure, of course, but not act upon it w/out an impetus like this or life-in-danger type of scenario.

I do really like the idea of the coat being its own character, and I think you portrayed that well. My dumb piece of concrit? Genital vocab. I just don't particularly care for most ways of calling a spade a spade. Cock makes sense to me, but I don't like penis or dick or member. With female it's even worse, as I don't really like vagina or pussy or even cunt. Clit I'm okay w/, but it's so specific. This is a problem when writing porn. Why couldn't they be called better words? (See what I mean by my concrit being dumb?)