Stunning. Bittersweet. There was so much I liked about this:
The dialogue was perfection and great as the focal point. I like that the rest of the piece didn't overshadow it. The reconnection of a past love, the juxtaposition of can't live with him / can't live without him, the ease of knowing someone even though they have all this time beyond what was "theirs", the ache and longing for that nostalgia ...
I have a great affection for John, and I like that this was about them both in equal measure.
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Date: 2009-04-28 02:08 am (UTC)The dialogue was perfection and great as the focal point. I like that the rest of the piece didn't overshadow it.
The reconnection of a past love, the juxtaposition of can't live with him / can't live without him, the ease of knowing someone even though they have all this time beyond what was "theirs", the ache and longing for that nostalgia ...
I have a great affection for John, and I like that this was about them both in equal measure.