ext_20030 ([identity profile] karaokegal.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] 51stcenturyfox 2009-09-11 03:57 pm (UTC)

The very end was good, I just have (as you know) a hate-on for the depiction of John as the whiny, clinging one that Jack is rejecting...grrrrr. But you put things well right with this story, showing the need and affection on both sides.

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