It's your first DW fic? Wow. That's... amazing. You have such a lovely handle on these characters, their voices, their reactions, the relationships - I can see all three of them clearly all the way through. That final scene, with the Doctor standing just outside the TARDIS door watching Jack and Rose, was so vivid for me it was like watching a scene from an episode.
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Date: 2009-03-01 04:04 am (UTC)I very much hope this won't be your last DW fic!