I really liked the interactions between Gwen and John here-- you've got them both so very right-- there's such a believable chemistry between them in KKBB and you build on that beautiful.

One little niggle though-- if this is a slightly AU version of KKBB, then Gwen wouldn't know about Jonah and Flat Holm yet-- she doesn't find out until late in S2.

Other than that though-- brilliant.