I really liked the interactions between Gwen and John here-- you've got them both so very right-- there's such a believable chemistry between them in KKBB and you build on that beautiful.
One little niggle though-- if this is a slightly AU version of KKBB, then Gwen wouldn't know about Jonah and Flat Holm yet-- she doesn't find out until late in S2.
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Date: 2009-01-31 11:06 pm (UTC)One little niggle though-- if this is a slightly AU version of KKBB, then Gwen wouldn't know about Jonah and Flat Holm yet-- she doesn't find out until late in S2.
Other than that though-- brilliant.