So I read it again and I just wanted to say that I really think you've captured their voices. I can hear them in my head! And I love how he tries to be nice, but it doesn't always work like: "with that piece of sh- your car." and "Now you are being a bitch. Sort of. Jesus, I'm sorry. Again."
And Andie is really being not nice, but she shouldn't be nice, cause she doesn't like him... yet. And she has some awesome comments too, like this one is golden: "I'm surprised. You probably have fans. You could hold court. Maybe invite everybody back to Casa de RichBoy afterward, break into your daddy's scotch stash and claw your way to the top of a cheerleader pyramid."
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Date: 2009-01-25 03:41 pm (UTC)And Andie is really being not nice, but she shouldn't be nice, cause she doesn't like him... yet. And she has some awesome comments too, like this one is golden: "I'm surprised. You probably have fans. You could hold court. Maybe invite everybody back to Casa de RichBoy afterward, break into your daddy's scotch stash and claw your way to the top of a cheerleader pyramid."
I'm so looking forward to more. <3