Brilliant, the distilling of these moments, and I like very much that you haven't separated them visually with more than a double return. They should run together like this. Also, love the reference back to Lucia; that's golden.
Also...this is terribly egotistical, but I kind of feel as though we're writing out of two halves of the same brain again, just now. :)
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Date: 2010-04-12 02:13 pm (UTC)Brilliant, the distilling of these moments, and I like very much that you haven't separated them visually with more than a double return. They should run together like this. Also, love the reference back to Lucia; that's golden.
Also...this is terribly egotistical, but I kind of feel as though we're writing out of two halves of the same brain again, just now. :)